 groovinontheinside 9/6/10 . chapter 6Please update soon |
 Daddy's LiL HeartBreaker 9/3/10 . chapter 6Omfg, I love teen Lila! She is worse than her parents! Only Ruby's daughter could turn out to be badder than her mom. I love her and Alex. Matt Lanter huh? Oh I can so picture that. Yum! Oh gosh, Sam asking Jess if he was getting gray hairs made me crack up! Um, chyeah, I can totally see how Sam can scar Alex for life. He's huge! That and Dean taught him everything he knows ahaha.
Damn poor Bray though. She really is screwed up. I love that Alex calls her Lila though. They really are like a second generation Dean/Ruby. Just worse which is scary if you think about it. |
 crimsonlipsivoryskin 9/3/10 . chapter 6you know what, Alex/Lila are so OTP material ... and he's so effing cute ! God, I love them :D
I want more. and more. and more.
OTP, i swear. love them to pieces; the way she's so f*cked up and he's trying to save her and ... Love them, really. |
 dEsItOoO 9/2/10 . chapter 5When I read the end of the first chapter, I thought that IT would be something like a cancer, leukaemia or something deadly, but it never crossed my mind that it might be a crash. May be the saddest conversation by now was that between the granddaughter and her grandpa. The one between the brother and the sister was very sad, too. |
 deansbabygirl934 8/31/10 . chapter 5your stories usually make me cry and this is no different.. but i was so happty to see this notification in my inbox.. i squealed and said yeah she's back to work! very good story i cant wait to see a teenage bray...i wonder who she's going to be more like..but i kinda see her being more a mix... |
 crimsonlipsivoryskin 8/31/10 . chapter 5god, the Connor/Bray part really wow'ed me. as an older sister with two little brothers, *sigh* you don't have any idea how much i cry with this. really, it's effing ridiculous.
just awesome, you know? loved it :D |
 Daddy's LiL HeartBreaker 8/30/10 . chapter 5Ah, the will. I was going to say. Things were tied up just a tad bit too neatly. Oh I was so not surprised by that revelation. I just couldn't see Dean wanting his kids to be raised by anyone else. Oh Sammy, getting all upset. There is something slightly hot about that. I am twisted, I know. Oh Bray's little outburst. I can't decide if that reminds me more of her mom or her dad. I'm sorta leaning more toward Ruby.
Omg, the Bray/Connor part! So touching. I love those kids. Ahaha yep, I can see how she would look so much like her mom at that moment. Oh gosh she even sounds like freaking Ruby. Okay that little confession from Sam surprised me. IDK. I just can't see Sam and Jess not planning for kids though there was their unexpected surprise Cara. Yeah, Unexpected surprise. That is the Winchester way lol. I love the whole Uncle Sammy/Bray moment though. Too sweet.
ARE YOU FREAKING KIDDING ME? SON OF A...OMFG! Damn Jeep Cherokee! See? SEEE? The baby never would of let Dean down! No I definitely wasn't expecting that. Teen Bray? Oh lord, look out world, she is so going to be a force to be reckoned with, that is for sure. |
 januarysunshine13 8/30/10 . chapter 4I thought I'd control myself today, but no..There u go again with those heart breaking. Did u get a PHD or something in angst? My mom just saw me in tears & she got worried about what might be I seeing in my PC that can make me cry... I mean after a long time I think I've come along to something like this. Connor's pleading for being with his mommy and almost throwing himself in the grave and John's hurt broken dialogues to his dead son, god I'm again tearing up just thinking about. And Bray, how mature she sounds for an 11 year old. I just hope with all the tragedies she had gone through in such a young age, she gets the happiness that her parents would always wanted for us. Really good job! God bless u! |
 crimsonlipsivoryskin 8/30/10 . chapter 4aw, Jonh. i love that man. and Lila Bray is simply amazing, the way you write her is really beautiful.
but, again, this is so sad, i cried again and it was an emotional rollercoster. again.
and you know what, i love it :D that's what makes a good story... |
 Daddy's LiL HeartBreaker 8/29/10 . chapter 4Emotional would be an understatement. I don't cry easily, but this made me tear up. The beginning with Bray totally broke my heart. Ah, the funeral, made me tear up too. I could totally see Dean hating funerals and Ruby hating churches. Okay so I admit, I was tearing up until I saw the words Jimmy Novak and then I was like OMFG! So yeah, I squealed. I have no idea how he and Dean knew each other, but I don't care. I love how you got him in there lol.
No wake doesn't surprise me cause I can so see Dean and Ruby hating them. Aww the image of Connor clinging to Sam's legs hiding behind them is too precious. That might actually be a great hiding spot lol. Bray, you are Dean and Ruby's daughter. You were born a rebel. Get used to it lol. OMFG! Don't scare me like that! I thought she was going to get like hit by a car or snatched up by a demon or something terrible.
Aww Connor! Such a mama's boy. Poor kiddo. Okay so where Bray ended up totally surprised me. I will admit that. OMG, I love how it was John that found her. OMFG, Papa Winchester at Dean's grave. OMFG! I just can't even..WOW. The end with Bray and John was just epic. |
 Daddy's LiL HeartBreaker 8/29/10 . chapter 3YOU'RE BACK! *SQUEALS* Okay, I'm calmed down now lol. I missed ya so freaking much! So I updated Diaries of a Love Torn Demon and you're definitely going to want to read that. I sort of held off on updating most of my stuff since I didn't want you to be too far behind in reading lol.
So let's see, where was I? Oh yeah, this chapter. Have I mentioned how much I hate Dean and Ruby being dead? Though the Sam/Jessica mention did soften the blow. On a side note, hell yeah Love the way you lie reminds me of Dean/Ruby too. God, Bray reminds me so much of her mama in this chapter and at the same time she reminds me so much of her daddy. I just want to hug her and Connor lol. I have to say that my favorite part of the whole chapter was the part after the article where she is talking to her Grandpa John and her Uncle Sammy(love that she refers to Sam that way instead of just Uncle Sam. Total Dean in her lol.) It was such a powerful part and it really showed just how much Bray had changed.
Anyway, awesome chapter! I should probably go finish that chapter of True Confessions that I've been working on all summer huh? Off I go then lol. |
 Tahiri Veila Solo 8/29/10 . chapter 3Yes, I do remember Alex. I was wondering if he and Lila Bray were going to end up together, like you hinted at in a ghost of you is all I have left. |
 crimsonlipsivoryskin 8/29/10 . chapter 3this is just so sad ;( you make me cry every single chapter...
*sigh* |
 donewithpretending 8/28/10 . chapter 2There ain't no words to discribe how sad that was. how lame am I, tearing up.
Great first part |
 samgirl19 7/24/10 . chapter 2i'm more than mad i'm livid how can you do that now this story is going to be hard to read without dean in it and this is coming from a samgirl and this story made my sister upset she is a deangirl
but i will still read this |