Truly character,touching but not too sappy and a nice episode well done.

I liked this, especially the first section.

Great drawing :)

I enjoyed this. A story's heart is more important than its grammar and this one had a lot of heart.

youre forgiven! i loved the picture, and the first two chapters were good too. bye

Lol, nice picture! :)

Very nice! Your writing style is almost sort of poetic. I loved the last part especially:

He can't win, he can't lose, he can't even quit the game.

So...

...Throw the ball.

Your writing is very good, for not being a native English speaker. :)

Well, I liked it. I liked the phrase about fear taking all the heat from him, and the last line was typical Tony. Don't let the lack of reviews put you off, and keep on writing stories.

I liked it a lot.

And your English was very impressive, by the way.

Very nice job!