Mistakes aside, this is a good read. Thinking of updating it any time soon?

nice

idea, Nuclear Mine Fields. hahahahahahahaaa

This is pretty good. There are quite a few nitpicks and whild the big picture is made up of the details, a good beta readeer could correct most of this. There is one glaring major flaw here though. How did the Roman Star Empire know the Race's language?The race certainly didn't know any Tosevite language. This could have been explained with a paragraph or 2 to make it more plausible. Of course you might have that planned for a later chapter.

I will say that you have the Race's character down cold. And Atvar dismissing out of hand the idea that the invaders came from Tosev 3 is completely in character. It will be interesting to see what the Race's reaction is when they learn the origin of the invaders.

All in all an excellent concept and well put together. Could be a bit better with a Beta Reader as I said before, but it's still VERY good now. Thanks so much for sharing.

1. So in this timeline the Roman empire survived past the development of firearms?

2. I thought Home was orbiting Epsilon Eridani.

Heh. I saw this on SpaceBattles once.

Interesting twist to the age-old forgotten empire. I think the downed probe was to blame :D

Zeus is Greek. In the Roman religion he is Jupiter.

OMG! S.P.Q.R.? Is this a crossover with Imperator Online?