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x-rayLady 9/27/11 . chapter 12
Hm, wonder why Rose thinks she always ends up with Scorpius... And if she knew who he was, why did she kiss him and ran off? Yeah, I think Scorpius is right, he's so dead, lol.
ober22 9/10/11 . chapter 12
I hope you haven't given up on this story! It's starting to get intense. I loved this chapter, but I hope you update, because I'm dying to know what's going to happen next!
Sabine8195 8/1/11 . chapter 12
I love this story! It's awesome! Update soon please!
Firemaker 7/2/11 . chapter 12
I love it. Can't wait for more. Scorpius seems really mature, and you really feel for him. Plus, I like that it's mainly in Scorpius' point of view.
Stelra Etnae 6/12/11 . chapter 12
Your story has an interesting concept, showing just how long-lasting prejudices can be. Even with Scorpius in Ravenclaw and Al as his best friend, people still refuse to forget. Most stories out there only skim over this.

This chapter is absolutely awesome! Love the ending. I can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon!
lovelyloony944 5/20/11 . chapter 12
ok, I'm officially DYING from not knowing what happens next! PLEASE post soon!
GhibliGirl91 4/26/11 . chapter 12
Lollo funsies, but I am of the opinion that likening any scene to a pre-existing movie is a cheat. Actually that's a cheat in anyone's book. Not that I wouldn't love that 'tango' to be the truth but it's a bit lazy.
GlidingOne 4/16/11 . chapter 12
You can't just eave it at that! That's illegal. There must be some rule out there in the world of fanfiction that says you can do that!

Lovely story, interesting, but you need to update soon!

-GlidingOne
The Big Black Panther 4/16/11 . chapter 12
Hee hee hee :)
xXxtellmewhyxXx 4/16/11 . chapter 12
It finally gets interesting:) update soon!
klutz5637 4/16/11 . chapter 12
Amazing Twist! Please Continue :)
Loslote 4/15/11 . chapter 12
Eeeeeeeeeeeeep...:P

I loved Scorpius and Rose in this. :D
Avanell 4/15/11 . chapter 12
Very cute...especially what Rose did ;)
Lizzy0308 4/15/11 . chapter 12
Yea. Another chapter. I'm so glad you realized it wasn't up and posted. It was fantastc. I love the forward progress. I can't wait for more
Dani Prongs 4/15/11 . chapter 11
Can't wait for the ball!

Loove your story
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