Awesome characterization of Raph here. Yeah, he'll never admit he loves Leo, but we all know it's true. I really hate it when people assume that Leo and Raph hate each other just because they fight. It's not true. Nicely done on this.

The Bubbly One,

Shell

Awesome start on this. I really like it and the way you characterize Leo. You've got him down. You're a good writer, and I'll be reading more of your stories.

The Bubbly One,

Shell

Awwww! And the true feelings arise!

pues no, a Rafa le es imposible admitir sus sentimientos n.n lo bueno qe Leo le entiende n.n

qe bonito fic

n.n

como qe se antoja para un fic largo xD pero hay más fics, a ver qe hay xD

(p.d.y vaya rebelacion, qe no te llevas bien con tu family TT te comprendo TT creo qe esa es mi excusa por la qe mis fics a veces se pasan de cursi XD )

hi!

Finally, I am reading your fics! XD

pero hay una parte qe no entendi (mi ingles es tan malo qe debo usar google TT) pero parece qe Splinter regaña a Leo por las cosas que hace Rafa, y Leo quisiera explotar pero no lo hace por Rafa, eso me dijo google XP y es cierto, Leo aguanta las regañadas de su maestro aunqe él no hizo nada TT (esto se parece a un fic mio futuro, pero creo qe iré por otro lado) y tú sabes mejor como son ellos por ver todas las temporadas !qé envidia! sí me he puesto a pensar qe bros se llevan mejor y por eso escribi fic en parejas n.n pero te qedo bien n.n

el qe sigue

No offense but you need to check your grammar just a bit and, if this was a parody fic, I would say that its...amusing.

I know youre new here and for a first story, this ones not bad. I just think that you should considerate more that Leonardo and Raphael dont think like this. They could never have a favourite brother and Splinter never says that Leos the best son. He says that hes the best student. Family and school are completely different things.