I truly enjoyed reading this story! Given that Doctor Who and (occasionally) Torchwood stories are the only ones I read on this site, I do hope you write some more of those-your writing is far above most writing! 10 out of 10 stars. No, 20 out of 10 stars! (Not mathematical, but it shows my appreciation of your story. I hope to read more of them someday.)

One word. Brilliant!

Kudos on a perfect ending

This shows the Doctor's personality well.

- Kudos on a wonderful chapter

This shows how much humanity tries to cover up it's mistakes and how cruel people can be, even if they are only sightly human.

- Kudos on an awesome chapter

This shows how determination gets the results one desires and it also shows how anger can be unhealthy and lead to hurt people.

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WHOA THAT WAS he just forgave them i know he is the doctor but that is to much hurt to let pass but i loved the story it was intense

maria

Good ending

What a brilliant story and please write more Doctor related fiction, you're really good.

A very good story, thanks for writing and posting it.

This shows how deeply The Doctor and Baron want justice and how Baron would do anything for his family.

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This shows Rose's personality really well.

- Kudos on a terrific chapter

This shows the corruptness of their race, even if they think they are perfect. Please answer the following in a PM:

My suspicions are:

1) Akra may have something to do with the death

(2) If it isn't Akra it is Radar (or the contact they made in order to get the pass codes)

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This shows how cruel humans can be, and that it is not just human nature to result to revenge.

""You're right. I didn't THINK that through particularly well.""

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This shows how Martha and Rose care for the Doctor and it puts him in a predicament.

- Kudos on a suspenseful chapter