   A Good Guy 12/10/02 . chapter 1I am totaly lost... For all i know it could turn out to be a great fic though! Mabye you just need to extend it. |
| Minnie 10/2/01 . chapter 1 I thought it was awsome, but I wonder who would win Visser 3 or Dragounus? |
| roxy 2/14/01 . chapter 1 it didn't make any sense. i just read it three times and i still have no idea what just happend. |
| Toadfeind 6/24/00 . chapter 1 hhhmmm looking around |
| Meghan 4/21/00 . chapter 1 LOL! |
| Ilana 1 4/11/00 . chapter 1 Umm...what was that? Bad spelling aside, it didn't have a real point and it was too short to be interesting. |
| AniSky 1 4/11/00 . chapter 1 U no. no. no. not exactly. |
| Kaladan Flashblade 5 4/11/00 . chapter 1 Needs to be spell checked over before uploading it, but other than that it has a lot of potential to be a good fic. |
| ghhh 1 4/11/00 . chapter 1 dumb! |
| Angel Eyes 1 4/11/00 . chapter 1 Booooo! |
| Katrina Breslin 4/11/00 . chapter 1 HUH? |
| clara200 4/11/00 . chapter 1 very strange and very short. |
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