I love how you made it rhyme while it still made sense. Fantastic job.

hehehehe... funny.

You did well...precious!

BRILLIANT! MUWHAHAHAHAHA! *dies from laughter*

This is truly fantastic:)

Well done!

The truest words ever spoken- in the form of a catchy ballad! I do love this poem so much... 11 stars.

*snigger* Genius! This had me cracking up the entire time. Keep it up!

LOL, i love it.

Legolas needs to be more sarcastic in fanfics.

Oh my god, this is FANTASTIC! It made me laugh so much. And is so true! It's absolutely fabulous! It's not only really funny but it's just written so well! Utter fabness!

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This is just so awesome. And the best part is that its so true! omg, i laughed so hard when i got to the end. mwahahahahahahahahahahahaha *cough* hahahahahahahahaha

this is really really good, the whole thing rhyming! wow. nice rythm to it too. & the ending

I love it! You should write the sequel with Mary Sue #1 getting decapitated slowly and brutally with a blunt spork. Joy joy joy, it is joy to think up such horrors! Very nice rhyming sceme by the way. Dang... spelled *something* wrong.

This is hilarious! I love it! All these Mary-Sues make me sick after a while.

Haha! I loved it! I'm adding to my favorites, of course. I bow down to your cleverness (and to your rhyming ability, as well!)*bows down* Wouldn't we all like to be Mary Sue every ONCE and awhile? Huh? Wouldn't we? Lol, well - I see no problems to "comment" on, as this little box is telling me to do, so I'll just pat you on the back for a great job. *pats back* If you ever write another ballad, post it so we can all enjoy it. Cheers!

Wow! Thats so cool. I LOVE the peom. Must have taken you awhile to write that. I'm very impressed.