 VolturiLover1 6/27/11 . chapter 1I love it I just Love it |
 anon 10/20/10 . chapter 1 interesting twist in the psychology. Thanks for writing it |
 Smile-I'mTheEndOfAllThatYouSee 7/28/10 . chapter 1 Wow! This is an intersting way on how Alec and Jane became vampires and their human lives and what influenced their special abilities. |
 beanacreede17 7/28/10 . chapter 1EPIC. LOVED it! |
 Shadow2446 7/21/10 . chapter 1Okay, even though this is way different from the way Meyer said Jane and Alec were turned, this is simply AMAZING! Whoa this is AWESOME! You did a GREAT JOB! |