I really like the start of your story. I see reviews here for chapters 1-5, but I can only see chapters 1-3. I'd love to see those other chapters and beyond.

Would love to see more of this story. From what I have seen so far, it would really fit in with the original stories from the series.

Interesting beginning. Can't wait to see how things go... looking forward to lots of bumps in the road ahead! :))

Please continue. The story is very good. I would like to read more.

Okay so I think that what you've written so far could be posted as one longer chapter. You've introduced your characters and set up the basis for the mission in a good solid manner. Looking forward to your next chapeter.

This was spot on. I can not wait for the next installment.

Very nice. This couple is my favorite.

Good glimpse into Bob's family life.

Cute.

Really good chapter. This was spot on for Tiffy and Mac.

I really love the Unit. I am enjoying your story. Please continue.