| Reviews for Your Pain is My Retribution |
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Nina 1/9/12 . chapter 1 I'm reading this randomly because I'm author-stalking you, since I really like your writing and your Sarra & Weiryn story hasn't been updated in aaaaages :( haha But anyway, this is so great! |
FlashFiction 7/27/11 . chapter 1Molly Weasley is such an incredible character! She deserves more credit than she gets! |
43dfglkhsdfn gbjklsdadfgf 2/16/11 . chapter 1First reaction: wow. This is incredibly well written; you captured everything in such real detail, the emotions are extremely well-portrayed, and you got Molly just perfect! Two or three nitpicky things I would change, but that's just writing style differences I guess. I will mention though, that then you are likening Bellatrix's hair to medusa's snakes, you use coil in its singular form where it should really be a plural. Is this a one-shot? It will work great either way, but I really would like to see it continued and read the duel from your point of view! |
starr1095 9/12/10 . chapter 1awwwww that was so sad i could just feel the emotion running through that it was really good though udpate soon with more! |
DiVaGiRl13 7/22/10 . chapter 1Oh! Here's how to change the category: First go to: "Publish" Second select: "My Stories" Chose the story you need to change, and you'll see "Edit" to the right of the story. Click that. Then scroll down and you'll see "Change Category" and click that. A new window should pop up and you'll select "Books" (or "Book," I forgot) Then you can just hit "H" on your keyboard and browse through all the book names until you find Harry Potter. If that doesn't work, then SORRY! And if you already knew how to do this, um, again sorry for wasting your time. I hope this was somewhat hopeful though! diva |