I absolutely LOVE your stories, especially how you put the "little buddy" relation ship with Goku and Vegeta. (Bura's not quarter saiyan, she's a half breed)

The whole 'langoliers' incident was hilarious. I liked the twist at the end, in which it was revealed that Chi-Chi was responsible for the attack of the langoliers.

Poor Vegeta-he's getting tortured in and outside of the fic. I had to admit that I was curious about what was in Vegeta's 'little black book,'. I'm surprised he didn't hurt somebody after finding out that it had been read.
As for the fic, this chapter-like the others-was very funny. You've been heavy on the Vegeta torture and, as comical as that can be at times, sometimes it can be overly humiliating (like when he pees in his pants, or screams for his mother).
It would be cool if you could actualy be a writer for an alternate DBZ series-the show would be so much more entertaining (especially GT). Your scripts are certainly much more entertaining than FUNi's!

I'm running out of ways to review! What can I say, this chapter was chock full of the wacky humour that you're known for-and I'm really enjoying it because it's a welcome break from my studies and stress!

You are such a great comedy writer! Vegeta and camping makes for a great fiasco-especially if Goku and Bura are involved! This story is hilarious-enough said!

Uh. . . since when does Kakay have blue eyes?

But cute poem anyway *cuddles the captive Vegeta from her head (sorry, hippiechic's giving me ideas)*

Vegeta: BAD HIPPIECHIC!

I love this fic!

LOL, really cool! You're stories are always really cool though :D

what is the next story called? oh, yeah it was a very funny story _

*snicker* I eally like that! Please get the next one out ASAP!

*snicker* I eally like that! Please get the next one out ASAP!

Fantastic story! The plot was fun, Bra and Chi-Chi behaved more reasonably than they do in your other stories, and Goku and Vegeta were adorable as always. The compliment/insult poems of Vegeta's were fun reading as well. There were a whole bunch of times I started cracking up throughout the chapters that I can't think of my favorite section. Once again, great story!

LOL! Really funny...i wanna read the nexy fic! - get it up ASAP whatever that means!

Oh my! LOL! That was SO funny! I'm STILL gasping for breath!

Veggie is a mommy! this is a cool fic. I think you should have your own country. now lets see. I already gave away the prized country of CHEESE! so you can have salami insted. :hands good author a 20 foot tall stack of papers: sign theese. just press relly hard. feel free to insult me in any of your fics I would be honored if you did. And now i must save the world from BIG FROSTY PANTIES! be sure to drink lobster cola, fly taxi airways, and use sumo park. we will bust a belly to get your car parked. :Newsman: a new report says that scince guns have been outlawed Drive by blowings are up by 80 percent. and now to report further on the subject is a midget in a bikini.

This is a very good story, though i am confused about the relationship that is between vegeta and goku. Also why is everyone seeing bura's evil side but her dad? Well i would like to know when you come up with the next chapter, thank you.