I find your story quite confusing, with no clear or developed plot. Your grammar is also frequently wrong, and your tenses and point of view (firt person, third person) inconsistent. Your character and plot development is rather... well. Your story needs work.

be with kullevo

Please update soon it's such a great story

please please please update

please please please update your storys brilliant :D

I LOVE this book so much so far pleaseeee keep posting its brilliant and i really want to see what happens between col and connie! Oooh and the twist on kullervo Amazing soooo please post! :D

I absolutely love this twist you've put on CQ! And Kullervo Lionheart? Spooooooky! :D update soon!

Angelmail x

Great story update soon love the kullervo twist by the way

Wow, this flows well. It's a little confusing, but hey.

One thing, sometimes Connie seems a bit out of character, but then I guess she's changed.

Keep going :)

hi im gald you finally update i really like your story just one question

do you gone to put some connniexcol?

Thank you for updating and please upddate once more, I completely live off this story. You are my continue.

Please update. This story ia cunfusing but really goog. Dont forget about it

i like the idea please keep updating

whats next?

cant wait

Wow- this is REALLY good! I hadn't checked out the CQ archive in ages, but I'm so glad I did now :) You've really made the idea your own, and your OCs are brilliant- the way that you've advanced the Society through the time since Connie had left was also veyr thought-provoking. Update soon, please!

-Eim :)