|Reviews for Neophyte and Neurotic|
| Shura Magami 10/2/10 . chapter 27
Well, there goes my hope for mpreg scene *lol*. Love the dinamic between Harry and Jacob. They're starting to act like old married couple. So cute. Usually, other fanfickers failed in these 'filler-like' chapters, where the calm after the storm started. But you pull it nicely. Love it.
Yes, sex in bathroom or bathtub are dangerous. Please don't try this at home! *lol*
Happy Birthday Harry! Where the birthday sex scene? *lol* Well, since they're still a few guests I guess that's too crash XD.
| PhoenixfromtheFlame 10/2/10 . chapter 27
Awwww the Babies almost ready to stand on its own :)
I've been watching it grow, so many happy memories :)
Thanks so much for updating :)
| Katsy17 10/2/10 . chapter 27
loved this chapter
| shadowinRW 10/2/10 . chapter 27
I'd protest the cutting of the umbillical cord, but I know that you're going to start a new and exciting story afterwards. The only problem is that I'll have to wait for togther part of the romance, but that's ok.
And your vampire was creepy! Creeeeeeeeeeepy. Poor Harry.
But letting Harry be babied was reall adorable. Seriously, I almost cooed.
| Kyuubi no Goddess 10/2/10 . chapter 27
Great job! Though I could have done without the metaphor, lol!
| Beth5572 10/2/10 . chapter 27
I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too.
| daemonkieran 10/2/10 . chapter 27
I loved your use of hausfrau. Harry as one makes me laugh.
| ChocoholicWriter 10/2/10 . chapter 27
You had Harry's birthday party on July 30 when his birthday's on July 31
| lillybean queen of the i ocean 10/2/10 . chapter 27
| Elianna Eldari 10/2/10 . chapter 27
Harry's birthday is July 31, same as my sister.
| AirKnitter 10/2/10 . chapter 27
Loved the chapter. Poor HArry and his neck. Was it just a random Vampire?
| Sylkie 10/2/10 . chapter 27
I'm cutting the umbilical cord." - That sounds cold. :(
Sweet chapter. Ron doesn't really seem developed, but I'll definitely take a sex-in-the-shower bit over dialogue any day. lol! ;)
| unique0987654321 10/2/10 . chapter 27
Nooo I don't want it to end! Why doesn't harry buy a new house, as much as he loves the house in the woods why not make the sacrifice for Jake? they can move back if the dad dies or use it as a vacation spot, but it isn't very practical being so secluded plus what if harry get hurt and needs help? like when he sprained his ankle and with the vampire, as much as i like the vamp, whose name escapes me, I think he should move. Anyhoo good chap!
| emiliexox 10/2/10 . chapter 27
OMG! a vampire attack! i was so not expecting that. im happy that harry is alright. that would have been a bit messy
and HOT shower sex. :D i always enjoy that.
and harry turned 30 YAY! how old is jacob again?
loving it, and im so sad its going to be over in three chapters
| xDarklightx 10/2/10 . chapter 27
I like it. Update soon.