  anon 5/1/12 . chapter 4 Plot is amazing but writin is not so good. Everything is written so simply and blunt. Try addin more detail |
| anon 5/1/12 . chapter 4 Plot just went downhill from here. Your |
 the freak of magic 4/29/12 . chapter 34this is my favourite story so far |
| Stephanie 2/14/12 . chapter 34 A beautiful storý indeed |
| BeachBallofLove 10/23/11 . chapter 34 Wow. This is amazing. I loved it! It'd be sooo cool if you wrote the continuing story with harry |
| MoonlitRainDrops 9/18/11 . chapter 1 Congradulations, this story has been added to my favorites list! |
| TheFallenSisters 9/11/11 . chapter 34 Wow! This is a very captivating and interesting story and on some chapters I couldn't wait for James to kiss Lily. I think (actually know) you are a very skilled and talented writer and I am now going to read some of your other work! |
| Rachelle Canterbuite 1/11/11 . chapter 34 I really like this story. It is very captivating and I really think that it's awesome. You should try to improve your grammar on other stories; it is good enough to understand, but it could be better. Good luck for your other stories! |
| purpleerox 8/25/10 . chapter 34 OMG! UR STORY IS TOTALLY AWESOME! |
| DreamingDeity 7/8/10 . chapter 6 OMG! LOVE YOUR STORY!
One, I noticed that you.. make things go rather quickly.. Although Your chapters are LONG!
Two, I love the way you pout loads of adventure and action in it!
Three, GOD, James is So in character, and, as my friend likes to say it, ON-THE-SPOT!
:)) That is all, I shall continue reading. :) |
| pigckle8 6/18/10 . chapter 34 wow... this story... beyond amazing. one of the best i have ever read. i have been glued to my chair ever since i started reading this story. this story has a great plot, very original, and you changed the story to make it AU, but you still kept it canon to the original text. it was brilliant! you have a few grammatical mistakes throughout the story, but besides that, the story was absolutely awesome and amazing. thanksssss for the story! [: maybe you will decide, if ever, to write some kind of a sequel [; |
| pigckle8 6/18/10 . chapter 14 hahaha that was an awesome scene at the end - the meeting of lily's sister. hahahaha i feel all like, HAH IN YOUR FACE PETUNIA! that's what you get [: awesome chapter by the way [: |
| pigckle8 6/18/10 . chapter 7 hahaha omg i LOLed throughout this entire chapter. it was hilarious! hehehehe [: |
| fantasychild95 1/25/10 . chapter 34 this was so kewl i really admire ur writing skillzz |
| Dragonanzar 8/21/09 . chapter 6 severus and slimis. *blandly* very subtle. but appropriate. let me guess, you don't like snape? |
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