This is brilliant. So descriptive and gripping, like many of the other reviewers I would love to see what happens next. I hope you manage to find the inspiration to continue this story, it's way too good to just leave hanging. :)

This story was brilliant. I know what it's like to have started a story and not touched it in ages but if you can update it I know all your readers (me especially!) would love it :)

Please, please, please update this soon! I love this! You got the characters down to the "T"! And it's so gripping! Amazing work my friend, keep it up! I hope to read more soon!

Okay, I love this story, gripping scenes and great lines, but that last line made me laugh. How conspicuous can you get?

I really enjoy your writing style. Reading your fics is like watching a movie. Your writing is that clear and descriptive. As usual your characterizations of Rios and Salem are dead on. Each of your chapters had me on the edge of my seat wanting to know what would happen next. I hope you write more soon. I'm really, really enjoying this story and I'm looking forward to finding out who's stalking Salem and finding out why.

update or i will eat ur face

:O

wy selem wy did selem do that same with rios

OMG, who would have a grudge against th- oh, wait, nevermind...

Good story. Can't wait to see what you come up with next.

I like the story and the way you discribed Salem. Suits well to my imagination of the character. Im curious about how you portrait Rios and looking forward to the next chapters!