|Reviews for His Possessions|
| Seeker-Of-The-Heart 7/7/11 . chapter 4
Noooo you killed characters off D:
XD Nah, even though you did kill them off, it was really interesting Your twist and spin of events made it entertaining. I can't wait to see what ideas you have in store because it'll definitely be interesting.
Looking forward to the next chapter. :D
| CH0C0CANDYZ 11/17/10 . chapter 4
I thought that the guardians from the tenth generation is supposed is to be like the guardians from the first generation, so if Lambo is dead, I think you should do an OC character that will be like the first generation Thunder Guardian and look like him but he must be the same age as Tsuna or a year less...
| Bo Loves thy Yaoi 11/16/10 . chapter 4
Oh! How about Irie? XD :D And anywho Absolutely love your story so far! Kinda curious about what you will have happen to Mammon's pacifier. But anywho Update soooon! :D
| ezcap1st 11/13/10 . chapter 4
Ooh, you killed off Lambo and Mammon... Hmm, nice to see that Fran will be getting mentioned, & yeah, as for the Thunder guardian... maybe put in another one of Mukuro's followers? Lancia or Chikusa could work, I think... Reborn and Tsuna aren't seeing eye-to-eye, huh. Can't help but wonder if that'll turn out to be another obstacle in this fic. Eh, so far this story's been interesting, with your spin on things. Hmm, I don't mind waiting for updates, so please continue this story (:
| windyhurrice 11/13/10 . chapter 1
I had a quick skim through of your fic. Since I didn't really read your fic properly, I can say I'm not sure of what your story was about. So I won't talk about your story but instead about something else.
Your tenses had put me off from reading it. It seems to disrupt the flow of reading the text. Perhaps it is myself but I have trouble reading your tenses.
It makes me think you just decided to stick an 's' at the end of nearly every single verb or word.
Take 'begin' for example, I've heard of 'began', 'begin', and 'begun', but not 'begins'. Perhaps during a character's speech, but that can be a slang in which it shows the character's mannerism and should not be used in actual writing. I'm not sure, enlighten me if the word does exist and how it is used properly.
Writing style can mean a lot of things, povs, how you describe objects and things, how you as the writer lead us as the readers read your fic, layout of text etc. Just write what style you are happy with and feel free to experiment what you like best.
Have fun. I reviewed because there wasn't too many 6927 fics, so hang in there!
| animefreakanime 11/12/10 . chapter 4
Omg le gasp! Even though 2 of my fav charas died, I still like this story! O/O . It's amazing! xDDD
| Spades Hearts 10/21/10 . chapter 3
I'm alright with anything as long as Tsuna, Mukuro and Reborn don't die. Update soon!
| Kuromi69Neko 10/19/10 . chapter 1
i love the begining
i love ur penname too
| Urge2Kill 7/23/10 . chapter 1
i hate it when ppl make mukuro look like a clumsy useless pervert
well, maybe he is but he's scary and mysterious and strong and things.
so thank you for creating smth mukuro-centric
| Serpenss 7/23/10 . chapter 1
Interesting first chapter! And I like the idea of Mukuro posessing Tsuna kufufu
Can't wait for the update!
| fauvist 7/22/10 . chapter 1
I love love love this! no yaoi no romance! Mukuro really needs to get away from that. I don't know what your writing style was before, but I like how this is written. It flows neatly. You got me to read through at 2am lol, so that means its working.