It was okay not the best though.

3 Kammel

I like it but just one chapter. You need to add a little more does Nicky tell everyone about the Barbirs. Sorry I'm not a very good speller. Like I said you need to add more chapters but other then that I love it.

Hey!

I thought this was really cute. I like Nicky teasing Payson about her being a saint because she rarely lies to her mom, unlike the other 97% of the population.

Anyways, I'm really glad you enjoyed Apples and I just posted Carnival.

For D, well, D is for dying.

Yep. I'm interested in seeing your range of writing.

Well, good luck!

i loved it!

I'm sorry I didn't think of any ideas last night, one came to me this morning, but it was to late:( Is till thought it was good though!