This is good, I can't wait for the action to start. The only thing bad I can say about this fic. is that your characters say "hee-hee" and "tee-hee" way too much!(lol) anyway, great fic. Update soon!

Crave...more...

You're a good author! ::jealous::

With my oh-so-crappy japanese skills, I figured Marth was saying something like "I can't lose" cause on one of my DVDs someone says almost that exact same phrase and the subtitles said "I cannot lose!"...or something like that.

Anyway, you must do Roy soon! We like Roy too. And...uh..can't think of anymore characters without going and reading it again..

Ooh, can't wait for part four! Will the hidden characters show up? Continue, please!

great fic! luv the parts of fox, peach, zelda, and link! down with falco! (says rude things throughout my game.)

more! must have more!

Ooo, I liked Lil' Link's POV Cheer up that grumpy old Link!

This is a really cool fic! It's very original. Keep writing!

DO FALCO AND MEWTWO!