MMMMOOOOre that was really good please add more chapters!

Amazing story. I really liked it. You should write more versions for season 2. :)

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You were thinking the same thing I was at the end of that episode. Good Job!

... whos Necros? then again, i dont know what the book/movie that you got this from, oh wells, still nice...

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you would expect me to crumble

but truly, in happy

without you, and with him.

in a new darkness, were the moon shines, and the stars twinkle"

thesunlight888888 at .com

all you id was write the end of Damage control which was completely beast

This was pretty good. I was actually thinking of writing something similar, but set after he collapsed. You might want to go back through and space out the dialogue better, since every time someone new talks they get a new line. You don't have to, though it does make the story easier to read. :D