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Ash4 2/22/02 . chapter 1
Great story, really cute. But I think you might want to charnge this "Girly! So...he game me thing." She shrugged" (he gave me these?)
screaming truth 2/22/02 . chapter 1
Well done. :)

Ren
M 2/22/02 . chapter 1
Very sweet story. I liked the ending.
mel 2/22/02 . chapter 1
adorable..absolutely perfect
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