this is really goood plz update soon

Interesting start. Good basic story line. Needs better punctuation. Paragraphs would help. Find a proof reader before you post.

great

Ohh..nice start! I just flipped thorugh random fics while bored, came across yours, and started to read. The summary caught my eye cuz it was kinda similar to one I wrote, but it seems different, which is good, cuz variety is nice. Anyhoo, hope you keep writing!

Please continue! This is great!

more? write more plz!

I like the way you tie Lily and Petunia to Voldemort, it's pretty cool...but, if Andromeda is his 3rd daughter, and the same age as Harry, isn't that kind of wrong? Oh, wait, this is the Dark Lord we're talking about, never mind. The story seems good, but the grammar is awful. I had a very hard time reading it, because it is so messed up; quote marks, capitalization, spelling...they all need help. Oh, the reason I read this fic (fidgets nervously) I have a fic, whose main character is also named Andromeda. I searched on "Andromeda" to see what I would come up with. I'm sorry! But since you haven't updated in...a while, I hope you don't mind. Anyway, my story is way different. Maybe you could read it and review...? Please?

I love it! You've got to continue it.

it's pretty good

Very good effort! Only thing: I couldn't finish, because there were a lot of spelling errors, and it was hard to tell dialogue apart...I'm kinda tired so it just got too hard to plow through. But, very good-thought I owed you a review :)

I like this

This was GREAT! it had a fantastic stoy line. i can't wait to find our what happens next. righe a sequel

oh couldja puhleaseeeeeee write a sequel? it's a good plot, with lotsa potential!

This my first Harry Potter fan fiction that I have read! I really enjoyed it!

it's ok