Good ending and good story however there are a few parts in all the chapters that I found a little confuseing but you did a good job

I thought there weren't any Kadeshi doctors

due to the kadeshi not ever having any illnesses

(Review for story (all 3 books))

A fantastic story, with interesting characters, dramatic plot twists and a solid backing. easily capable of being independent from homeworld. however the setting and lore of homeworld do nothing less than support it and drives the interest in the story ten fold. keeping interesting twists present even during situations you know are coming up from playing.

a pleasure to read and I'm looking forward to the finale!

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Dingbat91

i am surprised and somewhat saddened that this series hasn't gotten the attention that it deserves i fully hope that you intend on finishing this and end up not deleting it. It's one of the best homeworld stories that i have come across so far and i'm anxious to see how this will end up turning out.

Love. :)

Love!

This is Epic I say!

I really have been liking your books but you kinda stopped right there please work on this one more I know you have a life and all but could you work on this one more before the Final crusade cas there is just a little missing in the story