Cool story

Sick Story, man, I like part about the angel wings!

jaden

This is such a good story! More! More!

I think this is cool and iv'e played super scriblenauts and i love that game

I wrote this a long time ago. Glad to see people still like it! I'll continue this as soon as I find time.

So far it's better than the other stories here. Hope you finish it soon!

Hey Man, this is amazing :D

Great story :)

There are however some typing mistakes, and I don't know if it is Dr. Shaw, or Dr. Shay.

If she continues appearing in the story, I suggest you use Shay, because it speaks easier and sounds nicer.

This is really good! Keep on writing!