  Kyoyalover 4/3/12 . chapter 1 Haha I'm just reading all your work...:D But I love your stories about Ouran Highschool! Especially the ones about the Hitachiin twins and Kyoya Ootori :) my favorties off to read another story |
 thayet9 7/27/11 . chapter 1Okay,this is not ment as a flame simply constructive I'll go ahead and jump right in
Aiko was so freaking perseptive I wanted to slap her. What made her different from kyoya besides her hair? Did she have an obsesion with something (not countting haruhi who everyone seems to obsess over)? Does she have a sence of humor? Is she easily swayed or does she stand her ground? Why does she bother being in the hostclub when she can see haruhi at lunch? Does she enjoy the hostclub?
I know this is just a one-shot but her character still could use some work |
| angel2u 7/11/11 . chapter 1 that was a cute story. |
| Manga addict 7/8/11 . chapter 1 Great story and is a good site |
| PurpleSkye 5/23/11 . chapter 1 What I enjoyed about this story is the somehow deep symbolism placed on the game chess. I too know only the basics of the said game but it's amusing to see Kyouya meet his match. :)
Good job! ;)
-PurpleSkye |
| WhitishBlack 1/15/11 . chapter 1 Wow. Such a great story in only one chapter. Nice work :) |
| DarkAngel8290 12/27/10 . chapter 1 I just wanted to let you know that I enjoyed this story very much. It was very witty and highly appropriate for Kyoya's character. I enjoy reading your Ouran stories very much since I have also read through your "Of Fire and Violet Eyes" fanfic. I hope that you will update soon. Thank you for sharing your stories. It is much appreciated. :) |
| MentalAndLovingIt 10/15/10 . chapter 1 Aww...how sweet! |
| MentalAndLovingIt 10/15/10 . chapter 1 Aww...how sweet! |
| Lovelylynx 9/28/10 . chapter 1 I totally loved this. All the compairsons made bewteen the members and the pieces fit nicely. I really like your writing :3 I'm also reading your other stuff. hikaxOCxkarou stuff and im quite pleased |
| mamiolah 8/2/10 . chapter 1 Awesome story ,... and it seems like you're such a pro at chess... the way you write about each piece is insightful... one of th ebest oneshots I've read. |
| why.oh.you.are 7/24/10 . chapter 1 ur good...nothing left to say :)...id love to hear more stories from you which is why im subscribin to you :) |
| Arugula Pacioli 7/23/10 . chapter 1 hmmm, I like the start! More please! |
| AikoLuvsYou 7/23/10 . chapter 1 Make another for this oneshot pllllllleeeeeeeaaaaase. I wanna see whay hapoens with the two. Oh MAKE ASTORY for it! That would be awesomenesss! |
| SingingSyd 7/23/10 . chapter 1 YAY! You captured Aiko's personality perfectly and how the chess match setup was just awesome! Syd |
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