Reviews for A Lost Soul
RandomCitizen 5/19/13 . chapter 2
This is nice... :D

And will never get updated right. :/

(Update please only FMAxDP story I'm interested in)
Guest 4/20/13 . chapter 2
What you lack in quantity, you make up for in quality. Can't wait to read the rest. :)
Newborn Cretin 3/13/13 . chapter 2
this needs to be continued so badly the setting is awesome and if you balance out phantoms powers out right urgh it has so much potential.

I cant really give a review here since its only two short chapters but so far the writing read smoothly. it would be interesting to see how Danny adapts into life in the fma world also looked at the two pics it really would be funny when Danny meets Al.

Again this story has potential I hope you find time to continue it someday.
artemide68 11/2/12 . chapter 2
lease keep going! This fic looks interesting :)
fanficfantasies 10/12/12 . chapter 2
Awww, this one's nice!
Kitsune-242 7/15/12 . chapter 2
Damn, I love this! Sadly, I've noticed that you haven't updated in a few years. Are you on hiatus, or did you drop this story? Or was it adopted or something of the sort? Either way, for your first fanfic, it's AMAZING. Even if it WASN'T your first fanfic, it's still good. It's surprising to find a new author on here who can write so good! I love this fanfic, and honestly, it's the only one that I like where Danny comes to Amestris. I know you might not be continuing this, but just know that you have somebody waiting with baited breath to see what happens next(especially after taking a look at your artwork for this story. Which, by the way, I think you're SO FREAKING TALENTED.)

I hope to read more some day!

Kitsune-242
CAHawk 3/20/12 . chapter 2
Wow! Love it, update if you can!;D
Half-HeartedShadow 12/30/11 . chapter 2
It's too bad you haven't continued the fic in a while. It seems pretty cute so far.
rainbowMonstrosity 12/28/11 . chapter 2
Not bad...Not bad at all (nods approval) I would LOVE to see more of this! PLEASE? PLEASE! PLEASE!
jeanette9a 12/25/11 . chapter 2
Super sweet, I like it a lot.

He might eat , but I like the idea you got.

Wonder if he’ll change, eyes blue and hair black.

What about the doctor exchange, I will be waiting till you are back.
supaherolena02 11/18/11 . chapter 2
plz continue this fic! it's sooo cool DDD
1000Nachts 7/31/11 . chapter 2
This could go interesting places. After all, at current moment, Danny is more or less a blank canvas. I wonder how you'll paint him...
Zanzibar1 7/6/11 . chapter 2
This looks to be an amazing story. Please please update soon!
angel-feather-keeper 6/5/11 . chapter 1
Please update soon! D: I really wanna find out what happens :D
cartoonfan20 5/27/11 . chapter 1
can't wait for more chapters i really want to read more about what happens next
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