Kay. I don't mean to be rude or anything, but this is supposed to be in the MOVIE section. This section is for fanfics based on the epic novel by C.S. Pike, not the epic movie who just happens to have the same name. Thank you for taking the time to read this.

*Indigo*

SOOOOOOOOO SWEET! I love love love this chapter! keep writing! :)

Sharli 22

FANTASTIC!I love it!

keep writing and come check out my stories when you can!

Sharli 22

hey hoe bag its me G! good story continue with your lazy ass! lov you sis :D

Awwww, she's so cute! And I love that dog! It's such an adorable dog. I can understand Tyler's worry, the pressure in which he is under is very great and now, with the pain and agony of his parents death and the confusion that comes with Eve and why her parents hadn't told him about her is flaoting in his mind. Let's not forget that now, he practically has to raise the child. I can't wait for the next chapter. (I want Eve as my daughter!)

Sadly interesting indeed, Kianna. So far, so great! I really like how you start off with him, then dive into the little girl's perspective. She seems so sweet and innocent at heart. He's ok, we need more of him. Can't wait to see what happens next!

I Love this! Please continue writing this!