Interesting comparison! Quite true, really.

very short but very deep! I liked a lot!

Finally! Someone that actually portrays them right! I really dislike reading fics where people separate Youko and Shuichi into two different people. But you... You accurately portray Kurama just as he is; Youko who has simply learned about kindness and love. And although it was short, I really enjoyed reading it.

This was very cute :) I'm glad to see someone actually writing them in character. And using correct grammar. And actually being a good writer overall. Thumbs up! 3

This piece makes a good point and I think you are spot on. Nice job.

Nice job on this, it was well written. I liked it a lot and keep up with these two.

YES I LOVE YOU. THIS IS EXACTLY HOW I PORTRAYED THESE TWO CHARACTERS. Specially Kurama, you were right on target. I hate how people automatically think he's the cute, sensitive, kind, and ultra smart one in the group, when he actually can be more coldhearted than Hiei at times. And how you portrayed Hiei was beautiful, it really was :')

x3 You're such a good writer

ehe I can't think of anything else to write :D So you get cookies.

I kind of hope you write a full blown story including the demon Hiei and demon Kurama. I like this story but I hope you write another multi-chapter story after "Little Wonders" containing Hiei and Kurama not in an alternative universe (or at least where they are both demons). However, if you need a break for a little while after writing the massive story "Little Wonders" with such frequent updates, then you should take a break. You definitely deserve it! Anyway, I think you write very well and I am excited to read more of your work!

'Because while outwardly there was nothing very similar about them, it was only with the other that each could be themselves.'

So very, very true... and this one shot proved not only that, but why these two are so perfect together.

BRAVA, m'dear!

Very nice 3

I loved it even though it was short. You understand and portrayed their character so well!