Ohhhh, this story practically -defines- the word 'bittersweet'.

Wow, this story really does leave a bitter taste in the mouth. Not that that's a bad thing, the story is well written, it's just so... sadish.

It's a bit fast paced, but that's okay.

Keep writing,

xJadeRainx

Ohh...If only, if only. A truly bittersweet story, I'm not sure whether to smile or cry. A good read nonetheless. Though this will probably never ever happen in Bryke's happy sappy world, it will remain a prominent part of my headcanon!

The writing was great. However, I was just wondering why Katara was sad that her first born was an airbender and yet in her daydream with Zuko, she was happy that her first born was a firebender.

This was a great story. I didn't like how there was only slight Zutara but this is how I hope the series ends up since its been confirmed that Aang and Katara have a son. I would love for you to write another chapter about an alternant universe in which Katara did the things she thought what if about.

Brilliant. :)

a) elaboration on the canon version that TLoK is based off of, WHILE keeping zutara

b) ACTUAL GOOD WRITING effective nostalgia for all points and purposes

c) realistic human happenings.

Definately Brilliant :)

Wow from what i heard from your story,the series sounds kinda something catches my intrest i might not watch it