Very good story, now for the hard part, do a sequel.

*cringes* that is one of the most horrifying, yet pleasing stories I have ever read. Very nice descriptive work and character personality

I had a feeling, but I still wouldn't have thought.

Hurrah for non-heroicismss!

Whoa, final chapter was brief and to the point, like one of Harper's insults, lol. Hm...first you knock off Sid in OOTA, then we witness his final moments in Metamorphosis. You got something against old men?

J/k!

Poor Erik. Poor, Poor Erik.

*Grins* Although, we like it like that. _

*Snorts* "No one reads this story," indeed.

Silly Lady.

Poor Erik.

Scary Aki!

AGH! *screams and hides behind Hein*

Hein: *whimpers and hides behind Eli*

Eli: *screeches and hides behind Auron*

Auron: *drinks sake and burps*

Good god, that's *scary*! *whimpers and cowers* You must finish, if only to scare the crud out of me some more!

All right, so... uh.. Good work?

... Hmm, perhaps a different angle is required.

"If you don't finish, I'll have to take drastic measures. I don't know what yet, mind you, but I will!"

"Info-dump" I don't care! Now that I have some background on Erik, I can sympathize with the character. Hate to say it, but *this* Aki Ross I am afraid of!

*screams and hides* Y'see, *this* is why I don't like Aki! _

Aki's creepy. Stop the carnage! er... wait... only if it doesn't stop the story. Stop the carnage, continue the story. Or keep the carnage, I suppose.

Brrrr! This Aki scares me!

Woaaaah! SCARY! Scary, scary cool! Aki is creepy. She's cool when creepy. Much cooler than "Oh, I love you, Gray and I want to save the world!" Ooooh... Evil human Phantomesque thingy... Oooooooh...

... You're good. er... bad? You're good at this horror stuff.

Rut ro, Raggy! What HAS Eric awakened? Oh, the suspense!

BTW... the line about the private's burnt hand... bleh! I was TRYING to eat some Peanut Butter Cap'n Crunch at the time and the whole "pus" thing... *shudders* ew.