Very nice story...although the part about Calhoun transferring is a bit illogical, it is still a good story.

That was a sweet short story. Wonderfully written! Somehow reminded me of something, but I can't remember what. Good job anyway! Hope you'll write some more of these...

Very nide and sweet story. I love the NF series. I was floored when I saw that they had fanfic for it. I'm a big Enterprise fan too though. Great story, nice work. Good Job!

Loved it but I want more! It needs more detail, but you have definutly interested me in the next story. I'm glad there are NF fans out there.

This was really good. I love NF and was disappointed to find so few fanfics from it. This is worth it, though. Are you gonna write some more? :)

Very nice little vignette, especially for a first-time writer. You definitely have potential and should keep writing! Thank you for a sweet piece. I love NF and was delighted to find that someone had written some fic for it. I just wish I could find more!

Sweet.

it was a nice quaint tale. You don't know how geeked I was when i looked on this site and saw that somebody had actually written a fic about ST:NF. it's like one of my favorate series to read;)

really, it was a nice piece. wish there could be more:)

Cen

Not bad

This was crap, it needs a plot not just some senseless drivel about Mac and Shelby and "Love".

Kind of lame...but really really sweet...kind of an "awww..." story