Aww. :( So sad. I liked it though!!

great story i loved it its very nice and you should write a lot more as you have a real talent for it

That was cool. Thanks for writing it!

another great capture of naruto's character

AAW.
that was gorgeous!
Love it.
Toodles and love,
Oky Verlo

that was really good!!

it makes sense through my point of view

PERFECT!!

beautiful, man, beautiful. Keep it up.

omg! that is so beautiful! T.T

you really explained it all to me. since i started watching Naruto recently, i don't exactly know stuff about his childhood (past). thanks for explaining. by the way, i would like to compliment on the use of words...you did a really great job! i wish i can be as good as you.

WAH! T-T, that was so beautiful, i actually cried! Wah hahahaha!

interesting...I liked it

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...osu...
...it was good...

Not bad. :) Insanely short, but not bad.