Chilling. Well done.

You've done a pretty good job explaining the action sequence. Nice work.

Wow, you didn't put all this depth in your movie. But why did you publish it on a Fanfic site instead of the official one?

Just kidding, but it is epic. This is practically canon, and could have been done by the official team.

This was amazing. You really did an awesome job of capturing Jim's transition between the scenes in the movie. :)

This story is fantastic. I can't believe you don't have any reviews. Awesome capturing of Jim's character. It's all very believable and I found myself picturing the movie even though I haven't watched it in awhile.

I hope you decide to continue this.