|Reviews for In a Heartbeat|
| ChasingProse 8/7/11 . chapter 1
Chilling. Well done.
| CWolf2 7/23/11 . chapter 1
You've done a pretty good job explaining the action sequence. Nice work.
| Ninjat126 10/20/10 . chapter 1
Wow, you didn't put all this depth in your movie. But why did you publish it on a Fanfic site instead of the official one?
Just kidding, but it is epic. This is practically canon, and could have been done by the official team.
| No-one12345678 9/9/10 . chapter 1
This was amazing. You really did an awesome job of capturing Jim's transition between the scenes in the movie. :)
| crypticnotions 9/8/10 . chapter 1
This story is fantastic. I can't believe you don't have any reviews. Awesome capturing of Jim's character. It's all very believable and I found myself picturing the movie even though I haven't watched it in awhile.
I hope you decide to continue this.