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Reviews for: Unwritten Armistice
zealousfreak27 2/25/12 . chapter 1
Very nice characterizations. I love how subtle this is. They obviously came to terms, but as the title implies, it's unwritten. Very nice.
Aurora-Borealis Coyote 2/17/11 . chapter 1
This was so sweet. You have everyone in character, Ranfan especially, this is one of the most interesting fics I've seen about her since you examined her so well, especially at the end. Knox and May were really well done...and you've got to love Xiaomei :D
AnastaciaKorean 1/8/11 . chapter 1
I loved this one-shot, because it had such deep meaning embedded into it.

And it's true, only under the doctor's house equality can be obtained.

Winry's parents treated the Ishbalans, treating them equally with Amestrians.

I also loved how Mei was IC for this.
Oakleaf 8/4/10 . chapter 1
I love these two characters even more after this cute little fic.

Thank you for a great story!
Oh I wish I were a bird 7/27/10 . chapter 1
Aww, that was cute.

They were very much in character, too. Not many people write these two in character, so good job!
ChipsPlease 7/25/10 . chapter 1
Wow, this is really well done! I love how you took this fairly small interaction between Lan Fan and Mei and stretched it out into something very believable and sweet to read. I thought you got their characterizations perfectly and it was really enjoyable! Terrific job!
SilversShadow13 7/24/10 . chapter 1
This is really quite adorable. I love the interaction between Lan Fan and Mei. The way you wrote them makes it seem very belivable as well. This is deffinatly my favorite fic of the day, actually, the week!

Silver
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