Suspensful, good job! BUT DON'T GO KILLING OFF ONE OF THE MAIN CHARACTERS IN THE FIRST CHAPTER! Please update majorly soon.

Stupid Tamato [bops him]Even his socks suck [bops him again] unlike this fic though which rocks by the way! [hugs Hawo] keep it up and i want Q STRIPPING!

Hey this was really excellent. I beleive thanks to you, I'm going to be writing a Digimon Fic. thank you for such great detail and please keep writing!

Not a bad start to this story, keep on going and it will become a great escapade.