this is depressing make it happy something

Update? I am intrigued.

Wow, this is starting to get me interested but, first please update. So bye-bye until next time!

Well. I'm assuming the title is supposed to be, "It Started AS something fun."

Beyond that...one paragraph does not make a story.

what if someone creates another creature like Dren? With one difference, it can't breed no matter how strong the urge is. She is also more passive than Dren, but caring to those who help her and care for her.

She also finds the emotion of loving another, a human though. Where as Dren was more reacting on her instincts.

kinda short but interesting