|Reviews for Champions|
| Mad Library Scientist 5/16/13 . chapter 21
Is there any chance that you'll be continuing this?
| Guest 5/14/13 . chapter 10
Type your review for this chapter here...
| Candi Moonflower 5/16/13 . chapter 21
Love this story, read all of it today and it has been really enjoyable, Really hoping that you update again soon, would love to see how everything plays out.
| twihard1000 5/13/13 . chapter 21
Oh my lord... Please for the love of God finish this story! This story is well written and a delight to read!
| Velani 5/10/13 . chapter 21
I read it fan Fick . Very pleased, me pitifully that he is not complete! And the row of questions appeared. For example: will Harry become adult since he is married? That there with an inheritance? In fact Potter(s) old nobiliary family? That will be farther? As their relations will develop. Вообщем of questions much, but there are not answers... I hope that continuation is possible.
| The Pessimistic Dreamer 5/5/13 . chapter 21
It looks like you haven't posted in a while... Keep this up! I love it! I can't wait until the next chapter comes out. I love what you're doing with Fleur, because it makes perfect sense. We never really get to know her in canon before she graduates, and I like how you portray her.
| Caimthehero 5/2/13 . chapter 20
A pretty good story but it lacks a certain flair. You have a sort of precision in your writing style but lacks that addicting quality you need to be truly great. It might be due to lack of deep conflict in your story. Every conflict brought up gets resolved pretty fast. You also have Harry acting with a lot more angst poor him attitude which can be fine for some minor characters but is generally frowned upon in a protagonist. Keep on writing and I'm sure you'll get there.
| HoosierCullen 5/1/13 . chapter 21
Great start to a very interesting fic. I hope your muse comes back soon, because this is a very fun read. You touch on all the best parts that make a fic like this great and can only thank you for it. The characters are done very well and more realistic than the originals. I am very happy you didn't leave Hermione to the clutches of the ginger git. Dumbles is going to be hurting very soon with his actions and I hope Harry and Sebastian really stick it to him. The only thing I found you have wrong in this fic are names. Fleur's middle name is Isabelle not Annalise. And her mother is Apolline not what you have used. Those are just minor details that do nothing to detract from how well you have written this fic. Neville with Hermione is a bit of a weird point to me but that may be because I am a Harmonyshipper. Otherwise. Love the fic and can't wait for more.
| Theblackbook 5/1/13 . chapter 21
A really good story! Too bad you stopped when it was about to get exciting..
| area808code 4/26/13 . chapter 21
Great story! Too bad, however, it has not been updated since 10-26-10. But I have no rights to make comments. After all I have not written a single story on Fan Fiction. It sure would make 2600 Reviewers, 4901 Favorites, and 5375 Followers if you could update...and soon. Thank you for writing the story.
| Ranger132 4/21/13 . chapter 21
| kev sakura 4/20/13 . chapter 21
hi! i was wondering if you were going to continue with this story, as i truly loved reading it and eould love to see it completed.
| Fullmetal11791 4/16/13 . chapter 21
Hey! First and foremost, I just wanted to say that I really hope that everything is ok! You seemed like you really enjoyed writing this and in office it's been three years since your last update, so I am going to assume something must have come up and you no longer have the time for this, something I definitely will not begrudge you for. That said, I wanted to say how much I have enjoyed reading this story, thought it was really well written, especially Harry's character. Most people forget that he is really just a kid and with all the exclamation marks you used it really put his character into perspective. Thanks for the fun read, even if the story was cut short. I will add this to my alerts and favorites, but I'm not gonna hold my breath. Again, i hope all is well, and if its not, I hope it gets better soon.
| reader 4/14/13 . chapter 21
any chance that this one will continue?
why do so many people start a story and in the end do not finish the story? no time? no interest? why start at all then?
| auerlia 4/15/13 . chapter 21
Love it can't wait for an update.