Haha! The old 'repetition makes it funny' trick! In this case, it works wonderfully :-)

zomg that was ADORABLE! great job!

I laughed at Billy setting things on fire XD Loved it !

AWWW!

I love your story. I like how you divided it into different little segments. The pacing was perfect. Your characterization seems spot on, especially on Billy. He does seem like the person to have internal dialogues.

I hope you write more. It's awesome. Definitely one of the best fanfics I've read. Short and sweet.

This was cute- I'm glad you shared it with us- there's never enough Teddy/Billy stories- I like the affectionate play and getting to know each other stories better than just the 'sex' stories- combine the 2 and they're even better.

This was really cute! A good spin on how the two boys came together and what their times spent as progressing heroes was like leading up to the comic. Cute idea. I liked it a lot. Billy' inner monologue was really funny too! Very creative.