  evan 6/7/01 . chapter 3 tightness yo. this is awesome. keep it up. some of your sentences with the action are a little harder to follow, however. just a little advice :) ciao |
| King Pete 3/3/01 . chapter 2 pretty good... |
| A Small Bomb 1/5/01 . chapter 3 Good |
 Blue Lighter 11/20/00 . chapter 3great great love it too much to stop reading |
| wrath-of-gojira 9/10/00 . chapter 2 cool! This looks like it's gonna be great! but isn't Zerus the Zerg homeworld? well, get the next part up soon or feel my thermonuclear wrath! |
| manacalphantom 8/26/00 . chapter 2 OOOOO GOOD STORY |
| duh 8/23/00 . chapter 2 my butt itches |
| Exavier2 8/22/00 . chapter 2 Good story I would like if you could continue it I wont to read the rest of the chapters you right until you get to the end and I like thes story becuase there nice and short not really long hey could you read my story A Marines last stand and tell me what you think of it thanks Ill be waiting until your next chapter. |
| Exavier2 8/21/00 . chapter 1 Good story hope you continue it ill be waiting for the next chapter. |
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