At first, for no logical reason I assumed that it was an adventure story, so it confused me when the story didn’t seem to stick to one genre.. I enjoyed it very much nonetheless, though I’m more of a soul reaver fan.. very very nice story v

(jumps up and down) sad ending but really really really good

I read this story when I didn't have an account, and I thought it was so sweet. _

Awww...God, that was so sad! Rahab was such a sweetie to Sara, compared to the other's view of humanity. Very lovely fic! _

This fanfic is so cute! I'm gonna read the sequel after I add this to my favorite's list!

you can't just leave it like that, i want know more.

more like; she's an adult and she likes rahab !

oh what was the sucking noises bit? i didn't understand it

and sorry to say this but i'm a kain fan sooo you can probbly imagen what i'm going to type

i didn't think it fair with the teaching kain a lession bit

and i don't think he would have run, i think he would have 1) disappeared 2) blasted them with his lightning powers and 3)attacked them with the soul reaver

and congralations with giving zephon, dumah, turel (and the bit with) kain emotions. well done

please continue

pretty please with suger on top

HEY THAT'S COOL!

Nyahahahaha! I know I left a lot of short and probably meainingless comments, but I didn't have much else to say... Don't be mad at me! I still reviewed! Nyahahahahaha!

...I _love_ being hyper. :)

Aww...

Fangirls! Ahhh! Nyahahahahaha! :P

*evil laughter/snicker*

At least _somebody_ knew who they were. :P

Cool...

This is a cool story! I love it! :D

MMMMMMMOOOOOOORRRRRREEEEE! YOU HAVETA CONTINUE THE NEXT CHAPTER A.S.A.P.! PLEASE _

WELL G2G BU BYE!

SIGN,

FIREBALL

Aww, shucks. Go ahead and make me cry in the computer lab why don't ya! Group hug!

Awwwwwwwwwwwww! That was great! *sniff* Um... excuse me... *runs off and breaks down crying* ... *comes back and regains her composure* Ahem... That was a great story! Good job! I'd ask you to continue it, but it's finished now, right? So what's there to continue? I dunno...