|Reviews for Becoming Whole|
| Neko-fire demon tempest 10/13/12 . chapter 8
Well way to go Seth, tell her while she's in a hospital that way you don't have to take her later.
| k 8/18/12 . chapter 8
really i cant described so beautifull
| RCCBlack 1/15/12 . chapter 8
| lemmonpie 1/7/11 . chapter 7
as always you give me good material to begin with! I love this story and I love to be it's beta!
| Mrs Sorbo 11/6/10 . chapter 6
:( Please update
Your story is awesomes, i love your characters :)
| lemmonpie 11/5/10 . chapter 6
greeeeeat chapter sweets! I'm sorry it took me so long to beta!
| invader13panda 11/5/10 . chapter 6
more peaze ? :)
| hannah9page 10/21/10 . chapter 3
| Miss Book 8/9/10 . chapter 5
Oh no, their perfect for each other!
How ever will we find conflict?
I don't even care, if the rest of the story is just like this or anywhere near as good, I'm in.
| lemmonpie 8/9/10 . chapter 5
Great chapter as always! I only make it a bit better, you know, you already give me good material to beging with :P
| lemmonpie 8/5/10 . chapter 4
Aw thank you!Joan Jett rules and I liked her way before Kirsten played her!
| lemmonpie 8/4/10 . chapter 3
Hey! I'm so glad to be this story's beta too, sweetie! the chapters are great, I just polish them up a bit! and thanks for sending your readers to "Here Comes Your Man" I'll update it soon!
| Dimetriaj04 8/3/10 . chapter 3
Hey Im a newbie reader. This is my first time reading a Seth story and its pretty cute so far :)
| MindEqualBlown 8/2/10 . chapter 2
Beautiful, just beautiful
please update soon I enjoyed this so much
| XDXDXD 7/28/10 . chapter 2
wow! i love it! :DD