Well, this was interesting. I'm not one for long reviews, just wanted to let you know that I enjoyed it :)

I. LOVED. IT. }

Through this is the first time I've read this pairing, I'm now interested to at least LOOK. The weird thing was that I got introduced, to at least me, odd couple when reading a GrimmIchi fanfic called Dirty. But it was VERY well written! I'm curious now, and I'll be surfing around this couple for a bit until I look through all the ones that interest me.

Hmmmmm

Interesting

While it nags me that there is no real explanation of how they meet,

your writing style makes em forget

I like this, it's well done

IM A FAN! Hands down best sex fanfic that has "i love you" in it! Others do all the good stuff then go COMPLETELY out of character by saying "I love you" n im all lyk WTF man! XDD Its AWESOME!

Hey that was so good it made me have sex wit my partner 4 time omg the bed was soakin wet you wanna have a three some

I. Love. This. Story. it was beuatifully writen. the song is perfect. the actually lemon/smut part of it was well detailed. and oddly enough the way Szayel was acting seemed very so in charcter. lady Raven.

How could you write hot and beautifully-detailed smut like this, huh? This is awesome! I'm not a big fan of Szayel because of his pink-hair but you made him hot in this fic! And the kink was great! XD I just read a KHR DJ with asphyxiation so I was shocked and happy when I read it here too! This is so good and hot!

Dude. That was freaking awesome. You don't even know. Actually, you probably do. But... holy crap, that was just amazing. HAWT. And... awesome.

I'm out of sufficient words, as you can see. If I could tell you how amazing that was, that'd be cool, but I can't. It was too awesome.

:D

I liked it. It was different, and erotic, and I can't say how much I love Szayel. OOC or not