|Reviews for Valkyrie|
| Rpgingmaster 1/8/11 . chapter 5
Beg pardon, but while this reads like a good story, shouldn't this be an original story?
No offense, even if this is an "Original Generation" (original character only story), it needs to have SOME vestigial resemblance to a SRW style story, and I honestly do not see one.
Unless you plan to establish this does have a connection of SRW style plot, you should probably repost this on Fictionpress, because it reads more like a good original story.
| Shun Usagi 1/7/11 . chapter 5
Like your story so far,keep up the good work.