I am seriously digging this story! Will you write more? Please say you will! This is easily the best written, most interesting Inception fafic I've read, and I've read almost all of them!

I anxiously await your next update...:)

My Best,

Irina

This is turning out to be really interesting! :D

Oh I hope it turns out to be ArthurxAriadne. :3

I love your style! Crisp, clean, and full of hinted at emotion. Beautiful.

As both an Arthur and an Eames fan, I'm torn between who I'm rooting for. :)

I love jealous Arthur! haha I'd like to see more interaction between Eames and Ariadne and of course between her and Cobb!

I'm glad you continued. I thought it was so appropriate that Cobb was the one who knew (and confronted) Ariadne about falling into the dreams. Arthur's jealousy was cute. Does he (or will he) know about what Ariadne went through? Can't wait to see more.

I just saw the movie last night, so I had to dive into this immediately afterward. I'm very intrigued in this. It picks up flawlessly from the end of the movie. Good job!

not Dom/Ariadne? very sad... (

but i like your pacing still. i'll probably stick around until you veer off into the direction that seems to be the popular choice. it's not a threat, it's just how it is. i can't take any more bashing of the ship i support. but this is your story so it should go wherever you wish it. i'll just ride along until it goes somewhere i don't like...

Like it so far

i like you're take on this so far. are you bringing in Dom somehow? it would have to be a seriously compelling reason for him to leave his kids...

i like the writing so far, pacing, tone. keep it up

I liked it. Seems real enough a possibility to me. Glad she got to see those two again.

Thanks for posting.

-Ellie

Nicely done...the dialogue at the end was really entertaining. :D