this is very beautiful. why doesn't this and this pairing happen in the show

I love this story! So sweet and sad at the same time! Can I offer some constructive criticism? I really enjoyed how you moved back and forth between Tachibana's POV and the description of the story, but you may want to try separating the breaks somehow, I was a little lost as I read it. Maybe add a few - or *******? Even 888888 work well. Thanks for reading. Good luck with your future writing!

thumps up!

i dunno what to say

su-sugoi !

i cant wait for the next chapter ! update please..._