great more please!

Great job on the story! Very well written! I wish you only had more!

Very, very...Excellent.

I love the style of your story, it flows so well.

Cya :)'s Leah,

Oh holy cow! That was exquisitely written you have a real talent. I hope there's more of this story cause you have the makings of something really explosive here and I'd love to see it evolve.

Nancy

Hmmm, yes! Finally somebody who has also recognized Deacon as a person (and a very delicious one at that, yum!), not just a bad guy.

The story itself, though not linked to any context, is well written and quite sensual...

FAB! I would've made it more graphic because Deacon's too hot to mince words with, but VERY nice.

Wow, Frost actually fell in love. Good story. Actually made me think of Mercury as the female. You write well, keep it up.:)

wow. great story. i just cant believe you dont have more reviews for this! its great! you should really write more to this story! i didnt know frost could actually love someone. but hey, wat do i know!

You should write more of this.