What in Ooo does the Ice King have?! Why has this not been updated in three years?!

LF Longer chapters. Amusing, but needs longer chapters.

This is a decent fanfic so far. It's good enough to keep someone entertained, but the chapters are a bit too short if you ask me.

It looks like all these chapters would most likely fit on one page, and you wouldn't have to keep uploading little pieces of the story.

However, you seem to capture the mechanics and adventurous battles of Adventure Time really well, so I commend you on that.

Also, just to put this out there, I know this story is lacking reviews, but don't give up hope just yet. I'm sure there'll be some good reviews soon.

Nice work.