Well. I enjoyed this story a lot, even though I stopped reading about halfway through a while ago (not because I found it boring, but my mind kept on spinning new stories).

Anyway, my only, mind you, only criticism that I have is that we, the readers, are left in the dark about the strange Gnarsh, because Fox did not ask who or what the Gnarsh are until sometime later in the story, when we are meeting them, and for some reason he seems to know all about them.

Other than that one little thing, you wrote an awesome story. That is all.

Hehe! I like this very much. Good thing I stumbled across it.

Wow! What a read! I feel as though I'm a tad bit late, but I am still quite happy that I found this story! I enjoyed every chapter of this story and am kind of sad it has to end. Although it had to end I enjoyed the ending and enjoyed the little conversations between sword and pen (and there may have been a third, forgive me for not knowing). But all in all I am happy that I found this story and thankful that you guys were gifted with such talents. I hope to read more from you!
Sincerely,
Dayton

I luv ur story and i wish it could go on but i understand y u had to end it the ending was awsome i wish you would of said if slippy met amanda and falco was dating katt i luved it please if its not a bother make more if you dont mind

This story should go on the wall of fame! :D

that was an epic series!

Well then, I bid you, adieu.

Signed: Hoenn Master, forever a patriot.

Welp, now all I want is James to live again.

Fox, you coward.

You're still cruel for that little stunt you pulled.

So... You killed off James... Harsh.

And now it all comes to a head.

Oh snap!

Things seem to be heating up for our heroes!

The delusions of the insane are most... Disturbing.