this is an a amazing start very good intro keep it up

Interesting! I like it so far! Please UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!

First review! Now, I don't have any CC, most likely because this was only a prologue and is therefore not quite long enough to be able to find much that I can give you CC for, but I thought I may aswell comment to tell you this:

Please continue.

I feel quite lucky because I don't actually come on the Twilight section here much, I mainly stick to PJO... And then, just when I decide to pop on and lurk around, BAM, your story is right at the top. This chapter, although it was only a short prologue, captured me right until the end. I like your writing style, which I would like to tell you is worthy of my subscription as, if I'm honest, I don't subscribe to much. In fact, I hardly subscribe to anything.

But this interests me, and I'm going to subscribe to this.

Let's hope it continues as good as it started out.

Hahs

Oh I wantthe first chapter! Must read! Please! That was a wonderful prologue! Do Not doubt your mad skillzzzzz