|Reviews for Father's pain|
| Halece 3/12/11 . chapter 1
That was so freakin' adorable. I think I'm crying.
| Hyperthia 7/30/10 . chapter 1
Nice work on this! The emotions were great, and of course I loved the Parental Hughes/Havoc/Ed interactions.
Our lil Edo is all grown up :')
| 16Echos 7/29/10 . chapter 1
SO beautifully written. I love how you captured the emotions perfectly, I enjoy reading stories that make the narrator's feeling's seem as my own. Great job!
| Screaming Argonaut 7/27/10 . chapter 1
d'aww! that was cute! you wrote that very well.