| Reviews for Father's pain |
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Halece 3/12/11 . chapter 1That was so freakin' adorable. I think I'm crying. |
Hyperthia 7/30/10 . chapter 1Nice work on this! The emotions were great, and of course I loved the Parental Hughes/Havoc/Ed interactions. Our lil Edo is all grown up :') |
16Echos 7/29/10 . chapter 1SO beautifully written. I love how you captured the emotions perfectly, I enjoy reading stories that make the narrator's feeling's seem as my own. Great job! |
Screaming Argonaut 7/27/10 . chapter 1d'aww! that was cute! you wrote that very well. |